i felt the phrases "While other organizations.." and "Unlike least open
source.." are a bit too strong so i rewrote them
the leadership related comment is not that important in my opinion so
i removed that
http://sandbox.suckmore.org/hg/rev/c75d27be57db
please discuss/proofread..
Received on Tue Mar 10 2009 - 22:19:25 CET